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I'm primarily interested in people who want to write fantasy and can answer questions about what makes a fantasy, how well the writing works, techniques, characters, setting, etc. Check my stats before deciding!
I am in the process of writing a fantasy in the Harry Potter genre, but different from those works in many aspects (first, unsold LOL!) I've had one book published and several more in the works. I have been writing, editing, proofing, teaching, and mentoring emerging writers for 40 years.
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I have a BA in Written Communication.
The possibilities are endless!
To get my first draft edited.
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| odel | 03/14/12 | 10 | 10 | 10 | She answered my question perfectly. I was ..... |
| Lee | 08/26/10 | 10 | 10 | 10 | |
| Sam | 05/18/08 | 10 | 10 | 10 | Thanks a lot! That was really helpful ..... |
| Ron | 06/24/07 | 10 | 10 | 10 | Very quick to respond. I appreciated the ..... |
| Brent | 06/14/07 | 10 | 10 | 10 |
Hi Odel: What you are describing in your question is known as the "and then" phenomena. In your sentence: "john jumped then he looked for sarah, but he didn't see her. after that he walked behind
Hello David: Yes indeed, I do give critiques - please go to my website at pygmypress.com and check out my rates. I very much agree, what you have done right (effectively) is more important than what
Hello Lee: What an interesting question! I would say this: 1. History has been changed by so many factors that even your time travel plot may be rendered believeable through effective writing
Hello Sam: I do have some tips for you. First, if this story was inspired in any way by the Harry Potter series, you must remove any reference to Rowling's fiction in your own, such as "boarding
Hi Ron: It takes considerable skill to open with an effective dream sequence. Are you sure you have that skill? It's always a letdown if you read something you think is interesting and exciting only

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